Tuesday, 24 March 2015

100 Word Challenge-Zoe


My Ultimate Adventure

The floorboards were saturated with frosty saline water which acted like a canopy over the sleek surface. The great sail tore through the air as the gale-force wind whipped around the boat like a cyclone. It swayed vigorously from left to right and the rough waves urged to envelope the ship. I climbed out of my cabin and walked outside into the dark, gloomy wet abyss. This fishing adventure had just turned into a catastrophe. 
“ Dad come out here!” I cried at the top of my lungs.
I stretched out my hand from the boat and scraped it against a hard substance. Rock! I used my fishing hooks and line to pull us in. This was my Ultimate Adventure.

                                        

Monday, 23 March 2015

100 Word Challenge-Zobe




“It was only an accident, I didn’t know it was the wrong one, it looked so similar, if only I did three step success to vascular surgery and we weren’t next to the worst pet hospital ever!” with anger the Surgeon pounced around the room “Is it true?, Did she really turn into a sheep”?. The patient starting growing fur, walking on all fours, and started saying bah. Starting to get worried the surgeon had a bounce of relief “Wow!, I just completed the worlds first transfiguration surgery, Oh yeh!” (siren is heard in the back).”What that?” said the Surgeon. “Hands up, this is the FBI” .“Oooohh man I can’t believe I…….”Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. And the Surgeon had got tasered and arrested for genetic surgery, his ultimate adventure just got fired up.

100 Word Challenge-Gabby

… My Ultimate Adventure…

   I'd always wanted a superpower,  but never in a million years thought it would be this. I grabbed one of my dummies from when I was practising karate, and I shouted, “Evanesco!”. My dummy suddenly disappeared from the room. I decided to go on an adventure and fight colossal villains. I then whispered to myself, “This will be my ultimate adventure.” I run out of my room through the door, jump onto my horse and ride it into the woods. I see a house in the shadows suddenly an army attacks it. I shout, “Evanesco!” aiming for all the soldiers. I miss the chief who is stupefied and retreats straight away.
Gabby

100 Word Challenge-Adam

Great writing Adam!
Everyone have a read:

This week the prompt is:

         … My Ultimate Adventure…


As I opened the door ,the light illuminated my cave ,shouting out to me that it was the day! The day I’ve been waiting for my entire life. 
I had just turned 201 and I remember my father promised me 150 years ago that when I turn 201 I could fly out to the village for my ultimate adventure and see my very first human! I took off before breakfast and flew straight towards the village, but the sun was still not up so I waited circling the village. Becoming dreary I settled down in an alleyway as someone abruptly jumped onto my back shouting “Fly Dragon, Fly!”.

Welcome Year 6-Mrs Flood





Welcome Year 6 to our writing Blog.
Each week I will upload your 100 word challenge and we will vote for the passage to go on the 100 Word Challenge Blog.
Enjoy this activity.
Mrs Flood