My Ultimate Adventure
The floorboards were saturated with frosty saline water which acted like a canopy over the sleek surface. The great sail tore through the air as the gale-force wind whipped around the boat like a cyclone. It swayed vigorously from left to right and the rough waves urged to envelope the ship. I climbed out of my cabin and walked outside into the dark, gloomy wet abyss. This fishing adventure had just turned into a catastrophe.
“ Dad come out here!” I cried at the top of my lungs.
I stretched out my hand from the boat and scraped it against a hard substance. Rock! I used my fishing hooks and line to pull us in. This was my Ultimate Adventure.
3 comments:
Great work Zoe!
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Zoe you did an awesome job of writing with great detail and a sense of adventure, nice work! I hope to read more from you on the 100WC.
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